Term 3 Student confrences

Tonight we have student conferences with our families to share our learning. Here are my goals for this term.

Term 3

    What I am looking forwards this Term is going to Camp because my favourite part is doing some archery   and sleeping on the bunk beds and I am looking forwards to Art these are some pictures.                                                                          

Archery

bunk beds

My Writing Learning Goals

This Term in writing I am going to be learning my two goals

They are:

Use different sentence starters.
Add detail to expand my ideas
I will have know when I have achieved these goals when I can show evidence of these in my writing

The best day ever

look at Mrs Akiman  throwing the ball.

Yesterday the teachers had a game with the students.They played netball which was a fun game.The teachers won the game.

After that we had a Farewell for Mrs Akiman there was lots of parents there.People had lot's of presents for Mrs Akiman.

Then at the night people got chosen to go to eden park.They saw the players lockers..

My space inquiry DLO

Shhh it's a secret

Hi my name is Tai,we did a farewell for our teacher Miss Hopcroft

Farewell for Miss Hopcroft

My information report about Jupiter

Hi this is me Tai check out this writing.

We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write about:

• Jupiter
• Astronauts
• Earth   
• The Moon
• Eclipses
• Stars

My topic is:

Jupiter

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

Introduction: Have you ever wondered about Jupiter?Did you know that Jupiter is the biggest planet in our solar system with the Earth.
Main idea:Appearance Jupiter is white and light brown	More detail: Jupiter has invisible rings	More detail: It is shaped like a sphere
Main idea:Size It is 69,911 km	More detail: it is so big	More detail: jupiter is Really massive
Main idea:live on Jupiter No water	More detail: you cant breath	More detail: no food and no air

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3	Student Targets:	Yes!
Audience and Purpose	Identify my audience and purpose for writing.
Content/Ideas	Write clearly and include all important information.
	Add factual detail to expand my ideas.
Structure: including punctuation and grammar	Use different sentence starters.
	Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that
	Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.
	Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about
	Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)
	Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)
Editing	Identify and correct most spelling errors.
	Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.

Start your writing here:

Tittle

Jupiter

Appearance

Jupiter is White,Orange,Brown,Red.Did you know that Jupiter is the largest planet in our Solar System.Also Jupiter has storm’s! it is a spherical shape like a ball. Also jupiter has at least 63 moons. And Jupiter has rings that is invisible but you can see Saturn’s rings.

Size

Jupiter is  69’911 km. And jupiter is Approximately 778 km from the Sun.Jupiter is the largest planet in our Solar System it is a gas giant planet. The Diameter of Jupiter is approximately 143,000 km.Jupiter are always changing and can create storms larger than Earth! Jupiter is a giant storm that has been going for 350 years.  

Life on Jupiter

Did you know that in Jupiter you can’t breathe and there is no water. Also there is no oxygen and there is no air too. Did you know that you can’t see jupiter’s rings it’s just because it is invisible. Did you know that Jupiter orbits the sun once every 11.86 Earth years, once every 4,330.6 Earth days.Did you know that in Jupiter you can’t breathe in there.