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Monday 14 December 2015

End of 2015

I am excited who is our teacher next year. I am also excited being a year 6 next year and finding out what we are going to learn. We had our prizing giving and our farewell for Mrs Kingston , Mrs Curtis, Mrs German and Mrs Wright we are sad that they are leaving this school mostly Mrs Curtis because they have been here for a long time like for 21 years, the Samoan dance group preformed on the stage I was a little bit nervous . Here are Some photo's of the teachers that are going to leave.
This is Mrs Curtis when she was Vonairay 's  teacher 
                               
This is Mrs Kingston

Friday 4 December 2015

Earthquakes and Tsunamis interesting facts

In Flox class for our writing we have being doing nine task,we had read a book and ask questions about it.

Wednesday 2 December 2015

Boyznbikes

In Flox class in writing we have been brainstorming about what words we don't know about, on a motorbike image,this is our brainstorm we have done today,

Remember poem

In Flox Class ,we had looked back what we had done in a few Terms. We had done a remember poem and I wrote about camp because that was my highlight.

Flox Class' kiwi christmas kindness calendar

In Flox class in a few weeks our learning focus is to do our kiwi Christmas kindness calendar.This is our kiwi  Christmas kindness calendar my number is 19.

Thursday 26 November 2015

WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop burger king to g  some food frozen coke . We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll  Barbie and a soft toy Minion. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items pants and clothes and a pair of shoes Nike Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block  trumpet . Lucky me!

Cyber Smart: Consequences Map

Today we have been talking about Cyber smart. Mr Hopkins came into our class to talk about Cyber smart, we learnt more about it and what could you do if someone in your family had used your chrome book to look at inappropriate content. We wrote positive choices Neutral choices and Negative choices.

From: Tai

Tuesday 17 November 2015

wonderopolis

Today we have been learning about energy.We have this presentation to share our learning about energy and  Fossil fuels this will help you learn about Fossil fuels. 

Friday 13 November 2015

The trip to the moon

On Thursday the 12th we had an amazing day,because we got to look inside theses googly cardboard and we saw the world's most tallest mountain. I learned that the people who climb up the mountain have a race all the way up to the mountain.

Wednesday 11 November 2015

Tool kits

In Hay park school we had an awesome day because we had a tool kit day when new Windsor  came and present.We had so much fun,and we had these goody bags for us to have. My favourite took kit was vice typing and blinging your blog we got to know people from new Windsor. 

Friday 6 November 2015

Explain everything maths journal

I am learing to use my five times table to work out multiplication question

Tuesday 3 November 2015

Rugby world cup 4 sentence recount

WALT recount an event in just 4 sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup. Because the All blacks won against the wallabies.

Friday 23 October 2015

The best day ever

On October the 22th some people in Flox Class and Mccahon went to Hillsborough primary school we walked there because it was not that far,we played lot's of games like non stop cricket,water relay, soccer, tea ball, and tug of war that was my favourite game to play we had lot's of fun   and we won it first we were against Mount Roskill primary school and we won then we only had girls on girls the Hay park girls won. But when the  Hay Park boy's and the Mount Roskill boy's  did tug of war Mount Roskill boy's won.
 

Thursday 15 October 2015

Positive blog commenting

Today we have been learning about how to write a Positive blog with Mr Hopkins. Check out my presentation if  you can find who's blog I comment on?




Friday 25 September 2015

Word cloud Art

This term we have been learning about the past and why it is important. In Flox Class we have focused a lot on art and the way art is used to tell stories.
This is my word cloud that shows my ideas about art and how it tells stories.

Thursday 24 September 2015

Rugby world cup



Rugby World Cup 2015

WALT find or share information about other countries.

In Flox Class we have been creating a D LO about the rugby world cup,we have choosed countries to work on the DLO was about the team members of the country.




Also we have been writing about the key players and some information about the country.






Tuesday 15 September 2015

Te Reo Māori Conversation

WALT:have a conversation in te reo Māori.
In Flox Class we have been learning to have a conversation in te reo Māori .We recorded our conversation on imoive. Our conversation are set at Hay park school, have a look and see if you can find where our one is set,

This is what we have been learning  about in Flox Class,


Ka kite ano!
Tai






Friday 21 August 2015

Camp Moive

This week we have been making movie tailer using iMovie.This is the tailer that I have made on the ipad

Wednesday 29 July 2015

Term 3 I am Most excited about

I am most excited about Camp because we get to do fun activities and the most  am looking forwards to do is archery, and all the other activities are raft building,climbing  up the big ladder,sailing,out door survival,surfing.I am nervous about doing surfing because it is going to be my first time,I am looking forwards to the other ones to.
This is what I am looking forwards This term in camp.

Tuesday 28 July 2015

Term 3 Student confrences

Tonight we have student conferences with our families to share our learning. Here are my goals for this term.

Wednesday 22 July 2015

Term 3

    What I am looking forwards this Term is going to Camp because my favourite part is doing some archery   and sleeping on the bunk beds and I am looking forwards to Art these are some pictures.                                                                          
Archery
bunk beds

Tuesday 21 July 2015

My Writing Learning Goals

This Term in writing I am going to be learning my two goals

They are:

Use different sentence starters.
Add detail to expand my ideas
I will have know when I have achieved these goals when I can show evidence of these in my writing

Wednesday 1 July 2015

The best day ever


look at Mrs Akiman  throwing the ball.
Yesterday the teachers had a game with the students.They played netball which was a fun game.The teachers won the game.

After that we had a Farewell for Mrs Akiman there was lots of parents there.People had lot's of presents for Mrs Akiman.

Then at the night people got chosen to go to eden park.They saw the players lockers..

Wednesday 10 June 2015

My information report about Jupiter

Hi this is me Tai check out this writing.







We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write about:
  • Jupiter
  • Astronauts
  • Earth   
  • The Moon
  • Eclipses
  • Stars

My topic is:
Jupiter

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

Introduction:
Have you ever wondered about Jupiter?Did you know that Jupiter is the biggest planet in our solar system with the Earth.
Main idea:Appearance
Jupiter is white and light brown
More detail:
Jupiter has invisible rings  
More detail:
It is shaped like a sphere
Main idea:Size
It is 69,911 km
More detail:
it is so big
More detail:
jupiter is Really massive
Main idea:live on Jupiter

No water

More detail:
you cant breath
More detail:
no food and no air

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3
Student Targets:
Yes!
Audience and Purpose
  • Identify my audience and purpose for writing.

Content/Ideas
  • Write clearly and include all important information.

  • Add factual detail to expand my ideas.

Structure: including punctuation and grammar
  • Use different sentence starters.

  • Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that

  • Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.

  • Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about

  • Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)

  • Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)

Editing
  • Identify and correct most spelling errors.

  • Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.


Start your writing here:

Tittle
Jupiter


Appearance

Jupiter is White,Orange,Brown,Red.Did you know that Jupiter is the largest planet in our Solar System.Also Jupiter has storm’s! it is a spherical shape like a ball. Also jupiter has at least 63 moons. And Jupiter has rings that is invisible but you can see Saturn’s rings.





Size

Jupiter is  69’911 km. And jupiter is Approximately 778 km from the Sun.Jupiter is the largest planet in our Solar System it is a gas giant planet. The Diameter of Jupiter is approximately 143,000 km.Jupiter are always changing and can create storms larger than Earth! Jupiter is a giant storm that has been going for 350 years.  
Life on Jupiter
Did you know that in Jupiter you can’t breathe and there is no water. Also there is no oxygen and there is no air too. Did you know that you can’t see jupiter’s rings it’s just because it is invisible. Did you know that Jupiter orbits the sun once every 11.86 Earth years, once every 4,330.6 Earth days.Did you know that in Jupiter you can’t breathe in there.

Monday 25 May 2015

Saturn information report

IInformation Report

Take a photo of your plan u
Tai Saturn writing plan .JPG
Success Criteria
Clear categories with subtitles
Self
LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction

Use sentences and paragraphs

Use facts to inform the reader

Use different sentence starters

Use VCOP



Start writing here…

Saturn
Introduction
Have you ever wondered about Saturn?
this is a report about it.



Appearance

Saturns rings are made out of dust and ice also some pieces of rocks. It is light brown and saturn's rings are thick also saturn is a gas giant just like jupiter. The ice is reflective so the rings appear. Saturn is a very cold place.Also the rings on saturn were not always there, other plants crashed in to it. I wonder if saturn has different colours on it.


Size

The size of Saturn  is 120,000 km also Saturn is half the size of Earth.Mars is the second smallest planet in our solar system and Saturn is not heavy at all. Saturns rings are
bright, and Saturn is is colourful.A planet day is the time it takes the planet to rotate or spin once on its axis.Also Saturn rotates faster than Earth.  






Thursday 7 May 2015

My name in New Zealand sign language

This week we have been learning some sign language in Flox Class. This is the link to my name in
NZSL.


Can you sign you name?

Thursday 30 April 2015

All about me

This is a drawing all about me.