We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the
Thursday, 26 November 2015
WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader.
This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop burger king to g some food frozen coke . We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll Barbie and a soft toy Minion. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items pants and clothes and a pair of shoes Nike Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block trumpet . Lucky me!
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the
Cyber Smart: Consequences Map
Today we have been talking about Cyber smart. Mr Hopkins came into our class to talk about Cyber smart, we learnt more about it and what could you do if someone in your family had used your chrome book to look at inappropriate content. We wrote positive choices Neutral choices and Negative choices.
From: Tai
From: Tai
Tuesday, 17 November 2015
wonderopolis
Today we have been learning about energy.We have this presentation to share our learning about energy and Fossil fuels this will help you learn about Fossil fuels.
Friday, 13 November 2015
The trip to the moon
On Thursday the 12th we had an amazing day,because we got to look inside theses googly cardboard and we saw the world's most tallest mountain. I learned that the people who climb up the mountain have a race all the way up to the mountain.
Wednesday, 11 November 2015
Tool kits
In Hay park school we had an awesome day because we had a tool kit day when new Windsor came and present.We had so much fun,and we had these goody bags for us to have. My favourite took kit was vice typing and blinging your blog we got to know people from new Windsor.
Friday, 6 November 2015
Explain everything maths journal
Tuesday, 3 November 2015
Rugby world cup 4 sentence recount
WALT recount an event in just 4 sentences.
Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup. Because the All blacks won against the wallabies.
Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup. Because the All blacks won against the wallabies.
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